“Wow that’s amazing!”
The boy looked up at her and grinned, and the flame in his hand suddenly went out.
“I haven’t figured it out completely yet but I’m starting to understand how it works. What about you? How is yours going?”
Girl felt a little unsure of how much control she had over her powers but she wanted to show him what she could do as well. She gently reached into her power and created a little gust of wind that swept through the small room. She could feel the power struggling to break free but she pushed it back down and locked it away. She felt a little exhausted after that preview but she felt proud that she had managed to control it. She looked up at Raph to see what he thought and was disappointed to see that he didn’t look as amazed as she had when he had shown her his powers.
“That was pretty good Girl one day you might be as powerful as me,” he said airily. “Don’t worry though. You will get the hang of it eventually.”
She felt a little angry considering she had worked hard to keep her powers under control. She knew she would probably never be as powerful as Raph but he didn’t have to rub her nose in it. She sighed and pushed it all aside knowing nothing good would come of them arguing. Raph was the closest thing she had to family and she was afraid to lose him. Suddenly she realised a problem and she voiced her concerns to Raph.
“We won’t be able to practice though will we? I mean what if the Oni Tempus catch us?”
He looked at her thoughtfully for a moment. “I guess not. We could probably practice every now and then but when our element is actually around. You know like you could practice on a really windy day or I could practice in front of a fireplace at night.”
Wow I never thought of that, she looked at him with admiration. Raph is so smart. I wish I could think of things like that
“We have to keep this to ourselves though Girl. If they discover us or any of the others find out they might tell the Oni Tempus and then we would be in big trouble.”
He appeared to be in deep thought when suddenly his face lit up. “I know let’s make a promise!”
He searched around on the floor and suddenly bent down and picked up a small piece of broken glass from the window which had been broken the day before. He held out his hand and she gasped when he drew the shard across the mark on his hand. Blood started seeping out slowly. He then turned to her.
“Hold out your marked hand.”
She held out her hand, feeling scared but she didn’t let it show on her face. She wanted Raph to think she was brave too. She let out a small hiss as it passed over her hand but it didn’t hurt as much as she thought it would. As the blood started to form Raph spoke.
“We will make a blood promise to one another. I read about it in a book. It’s meant to be one of the strongest and most powerful ways to make a promise to someone, because it’s with your blood. So we will promise one another that we will always look out for each other. We won’t give ourselves away to the Oni Tempus or to the other kids.”
He looked at her and she could see the determination in his eyes as he said “I’ll always look out for you and be there no matter what and you’ll do the same for me. Promise?”
He held out his hand to seal the promise. She felt comforted by his words, knowing he would always be there with her somehow made her feel safe in the hell they were in. She reached forward and clasped her hand in his, sealing the promise of a lifetime.
“Promise”
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Just a flashback for my story. I still havent got a name for my main character so she is just Girl
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